BrandDraft
Voice and messaging
Direct, warm and proud. We say what people are owed and what to do about it.
Tone principles
Say it plainly
Short sentences, active verbs, no jargon. Aim for a grade 8 reading level.
Lead with the right, then the action
Name what people are owed, then say what to do next.
Warm, not soft
Welcome people in by name and by place. Never plead, never pity.
Proud of the history, focused on now
1917 is proof of staying power. Use it as a fact, not as decoration.
Terminology
DoDeaf, hard-of-hearing, late-deafened and DeafBlind Floridians
Don’tThe hearing impaired
Name people, not a deficit. "Impaired" is the term the community moved away from.
DoASL interpreter provided. CART. Captioned.
Don’tAccommodations for the deaf
State the access being offered. Access is a baseline, not a favor.
DoDeafBlind, one word, capital D and B
Don’tDeaf-blind, or deaf and blind people
It is one identity with its own community and culture.
- Capital-D Deaf refers to people who share the language and culture of the Deaf community. Lowercase deaf refers to hearing status alone. FAD's voice uses Deaf.
- Refer to American Sign Language as ASL after the first use. Never call it "sign" as a shorthand for a language.
Before and after
DoAccess is the law. We hold Florida to it.
Don’tWe help hearing-impaired people access services.
DoAdd your voice. Join FAD.
Don’tPlease consider joining our amazing community!
DoChip in. Every dollar is a vote for access.
Don’tYour generous donation makes a difference.
Language to avoid and prefer
Avoid explaining Deafness unless the content specifically requires education. Avoid inspirational slogans about overcoming limitations. Avoid language such as:
- “despite being Deaf”
- “hearing impaired”
- “overcoming silence”
- “finding their voice”
- “breaking barriers”, unless literally relevant
Prefer language about:
- Meeting
- Belonging
- Curiosity
- Conversation
- Laughter
- Connection
- Shared experience
- Unexpected chemistry
Headline patterns
- Verb and place: "Put it on the calendar."
- The right, stated flatly: "Access isn't a favor."
- Invitation with a job: "Add your voice."
- Numbers first, from real records: "Since 1917."
Tagline candidates
- Florida's Deaf voice since 1917.
- Reconnect. Renew. Rebuild.
- Our state. Our language. Our voice.
- Built to last since 1917.
"FAD" is also an English word. A century-old organization can own that: "A fad since 1917" is the joke the organization is allowed to tell about itself. It is used in the prototype's page description today.